要在上海找工作了,这是我的英文resume

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要在上海找工作了,这是我的英文resume
我和我在美国的recuiter把这个英文的简历完工了.虽然他是professional但毕竟是美国人,他说简历要简洁,用动词,不能用complete sentence.我需要在上海外资企业有工作经验的朋友给一点建议!（格式,排列,语法）这是准备在上海找工作.看到答案后我会再增加悬赏分的.还有在中国面试要注意些什么?等这些问题解决后,要开始折腾中文简历了.
OBJECTIVE:
Seeking accounting/finance related position
EDUCATION:
University of North Carolina at Greensboro (UNCG)
B.S in Accounting,August 2006
Relevant courses:Financial Accounting,Managerial Accounting,Intermediate Accounting,Accounting Information Systems,Business computing I,Business Process Information Technology,Communication Studies,Business Ethics
ADDITIONAL EDUCATION:
HR Block
Tax course (September 2007-November 2007)
SKILLS:
Computer:MS Office (Word,Excel,PowerPoint,Access) Internet,Ralph,PeopleSoft,QuickBooks,AS400,Concur
Languages:English,Chinese
WORK EXPERIENCE:
ENTERPRISE RENT A CAR
Area Accountant May 2006-May 2007
 Provide internal support to 12 rental branches
 Approve cash receipt

答案

你工作过的,把work experience 放在education前面,时间降序排列
动词用过去式 i.e.provided
你内容写太多了,超过一页,要缩减一下,把 responsibility 归纳一下,减少点.