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how time flew .summer hoilday was over and it was time forr school .i was very happy to come to a new school and have some new friends.iwas told to have a new deskmate ,her name is candy .we got alone well with each other and became good friends quickly.

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how fast time flew!summer hoilday was over and it was time for school .i was very happy to come to a new school and had some new friends.i was told to have a new deskmate,whose name is candy.we got along well with each other and became good friends quickly.