英语文章纠错

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英语文章纠错
my summer vacation
The summer vacation had come round again.I was happy that I could forget about school at least for a while.Lest I fool around all through this summer vacation,I made a plan as to how to spend it.First,I thought I should go over all those things my teachers taught in the previous term so that I could have a better understanding of them.Then I thought I should take up some forms of exercise,such as walking,running and rowing,to keep me physically strong.It stood to reason that with such a good plan I should make the best of my vacation time.I did,because I lived up to what I had planned.
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答案

The summer vacation had COME again.I was happy that I could FORGET school at least for a while.Lest I fool around all through this summer vacation,I made a plan ON how to spend it.First,I thought I should go over all those things my teachers HAD taught in the previous term so that I could have a better understanding of them.Then I thought I should take up SOME EXERCISE,such as walking,running and rowing,to keep me physically strong.It stood to reason that with such a good plan I should make the best of my vacation time.I did,because I lived up to what I had planned.
改过的地方用大写了.
其他错误我觉得应该是没有了,但是读起来觉得表达蛮奇怪的,有的地方有点累赘.你是写这个暑假吗?那用一般过去时就够了.还有我觉得倒数第二句的should 可以改成would或could,不懂你在那里是想表达什么意思就是了.