这句话中有没有错误的?

题目

这句话中有没有错误的?
On the one hand,laws must be make to solve this problem in a legal way.On the other hand,more attention should be paid to this problem by all people to taken it.
On the one hand 这个the 要不要去掉?
最后那个taken

答案

the不用去掉
On the one hand.
On the other hand 是固定搭配
to taken it 可以去掉 太累赘了
如果你想用的话 要改成to take it