English In My Eyes

题目

English In My Eyes
Most English learners take English as a foreign language.However,I always believe that a language could have emotion.That is my first understanding of English---- emotional.
English is not a fool who pay you emotion without any reward.You should pay your patient and emotion to English every time you sing in it,you write in it and you make foreign friends in it.Learning English is not an easy job to finish.You may struggle with it or even be crazy for it.So,when you are happy with English,you should try to keep this going on; when you are angry with English exam or practice,you should be nice and gentle to English because it is easy to hurt.The more you love English,the more English gives you more progress and deeper understanding.It just likes a little baby who needs your care and guidance.It also like a good friend who gives you helps and encourage.
This writing is not showing a way to learn English,but a way to understand it.We have learnt foreign language for many years,so many that we might not be sure how many years indeed,but we have a little time to understand English.I hope this could be meaningful to English learners and English users.

答案

English In My Eyes
Most English learners take English as a foreign language.However,I always believe that a language has emotion.That is my first experience of English---- an emotional language.
English is not like a fool who pays you emotion without any reward.（这一句意思很怪异建议更改或去掉,我不知道你要表达什么） You should pay back with your patience and emotion by singing in it,writing in it and making foreign friends.Learning English is not an easy job.You ought to stick with it and be crazy for it.So,when you are happy with English,you should try to keep this going on; when you are angry with English exams or practices,you should be nice and gentle to English because it eassily gets hurt.The more you love English,the more progress and deeper understanding you can get.It just likes a little baby who needs your care and guidance.It also like a good friend who gives you help and encourage.
This writing is not showing a way to learn English,but a way to understand it.We have learnt foreign language for many years,so many that we might not be sure how many years we've spent on it indeed.We need a little time to understand English.I hope this could be helpful to English learners and English users.
我觉得整篇文章中式英语的味道很比较浓,而且感觉文章不大通顺也就是意思怪怪的,不知道这篇文章的用途是什么,我把认为要修改的地方都认真修改了下,希望你再把文章主体重新考虑一下想清楚想要表达的意思.
PS:已经修改完了,希望我的回答能够帮到你~