写了一篇英语作文,那一位英语高手帮忙看一下有没有错的地方.

题目

写了一篇英语作文,那一位英语高手帮忙看一下有没有错的地方.
My weekend
Today is my weekend.I’m very happy.In the morning,I will eat breakfast .My breakfast is bread and milk.After breakfast,I will do my homework and play computer games.In the afternoon,I am going to fishing with my Father.In the evening,I will eat dinner,and watch TV with my father and my mother.
Goodbye,I’m going to have breakfast.

答案

因为不知道这位同学你是几年级,英语学到哪儿了.这边用的一般将来时乍一看有点问题,后来才发现是讲今天的打算.那最好能在开始的地方说明一下现在仍是早上,下面写都是我今天的计划.但这个我就先不给你改了.改的几个地...