一篇英语的自我介绍,帮忙看看有没有错的地方!

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一篇英语的自我介绍,帮忙看看有没有错的地方!
Hello,everyone!My name is Hong Xiaofang.I am 13 years old.I was born in FuJian but mow I live with my family in Nanjing. I stay in No.13 middle school.I am in Class4,Grade 7.
I am tall.I wear glasses.I have short black hair and my eyes are small.
I like listening to music and reading.I read books every day.I listen to CDs at the weekend.
I like Maths. I am good at Maths but I am not very good at English.
I have one brother .Hia name is Hong Runze. I work hard.

答案

I stay in No.13 middle school.改
I study in.比较好.
Hia name is Hong Runze.你一定打错了,是：
His name is.
I like listening to music and reading.I read books every day.I listen to CDs at the weekend.最好改为：
I love listening to music.I listen to CDs at the weekend.I like reading too.I read books everyday.
everyday好像是并起来的.
仅供参考.