英文推荐信 求改错~

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英文推荐信 求改错~
看看有无错 能否再书面和优美一些?
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to strongly recommend XX,a worthy youth,as a prospective candidate for your LL.M program.
I was really impressed by Miss Ye’s performance during her study.She listened to the class very attentively.Her notes were always clear and clean.And she was always the active student in the discussion with the classmates and me.I was delighted to see that some of her questions were thoughtful.On the other hand,her homeworks and paper were excellent.
In the daily life,Miss Ye is very modest and open to advice.When she told me she was planning for further study in Germany,I encourage her.Because of Miss Ye’s diligence and trustworthy personality,I am sure you will find her a diligent and pleasant person.
I would greatly appreciate it if you could give her application for your program.Should you need more information of Miss Ye,please do not hesitate to contact me.

答案

基本上可以了.一下有几点不足,纯属个人意见.1.如果推荐人是普通的教职员工、讲师,这样写大致可以了.如果是教授、副教授级别的,建议你把作业这部分修改一下,批改作业很多时候是助教完成的,教授一般不花时间看作业；另...