那位高人帮我看看这段英文有什么语法错误!

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那位高人帮我看看这段英文有什么语法错误!
Recently,it was significantly increasing that many travelers from different places prefer to join dragon boat event in China for vacation annually.For instance,there were 10,000 visitors who were dragon boat competitors and their families,and spectator were attracted to Hong Kong to participate in the event in 2003 .

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第一句话不用it,因为没有上下文,看到it,不能一目了然知道it指代的什么我的个人建议,供你参考there was a great growth in the number of travelers from different places who like to join the annually boat event...