00 As is humorously demonstrated in the pictures,with the rampancy of commercial fishing,

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00 As is humorously demonstrated in the pictures,with the rampancy of commercial fishing,
英语作文,帮我看看有没有语法错误和用词不当的,以及怎样修改,我对你的感激如同滔滔江水,绵绵不绝……
As is humorously demonstrated in the pictures,with the rampancy of commercial fishing,the number of fishes has dramatically shrunk.In the upper picture,there were various kinds of fishes and only one fishing-boat in 1990.On the contrary,in 1995 there was only one fish swimming freely but many fishing-boats sailing in sea.What is conveyed in the pictures is both realistic and most thought-provoking.
The implied meaning which is conveyed in the pictures can be briefly stated in the following three aspects.To begin with,all natural resources such as fish are limited.And some of them are not renewable.Thus,it is a must to make wise use of natural resources.What’s more,ecosystem should be protected in order to keep sustainable development.If we only care about the present,we will suffer punishment in the future.In addition,excessive exploita

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写得很好,以下个人意见第一段第二句,fishes应用fish,这个词单复同形,there were 应用there are,因为说到Picture都是现在时后面同理第四句,in sea改为in the sea,习惯用法第二段倒数第二局；in years to come,建议改...