高手帮我批改一下这篇英语作文
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高手帮我批改一下这篇英语作文
帮我看看这篇作文,给我些具体 的意见,
One day I was about to go outside to play when I saw my mother being busy with several housework at the same time.She looked so tired,and I felt guilty,Therefore I made a determination to share housework with her.I was about to wash the clothes when my friend called me up and asked me to play with her.I told her that I would go on the condition that completing my washing.Then I go on washing ,Only then did I realized it was such a tiring thing to wash clothes,and how tired my mother was.While my mother not only worked outside but also took the responsibility of our housework inside,she never complaint to us.After washing I felt tired though ,my mother praised me ,and said that I was a good child.I felt happy.
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