急 在线等!英语! 很短大家看看!语法检查

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急 在线等!英语! 很短大家看看!语法检查
给大使馆的信 大家给看看有没有语法错误或拼写错误 或者有什么不妥的地方例如委婉语气什么的... 谢谢各位了!
Dear Officer:
This letter about my application for a Cannada Study Permit.
My name is ****. File No.:*****. I have received the letter of request to submit CAQ from you.New CAQ is handling, but it may takes time.
I have submitted the CAQ when I delivered the application material . I hope you don’t mind my asking, but I wonder if you could look up one time.I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours truly,
***
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尊敬的签证官你好！

我叫**，档案号：+++ 收到贵处的信要求提交CAQ，新的CAQ正在办理但可能需要时间。
在递交材料时我把CAQ也一起递交上去了。希望您能再查阅一下。
就是说我的CAQ已经寄给大使馆了 但他们说没有 要我补一份 我想让他再查一下

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Dear officer,I am XX,file No.XX.I have received a letter requesting to submit an CAQ.I thought I had submit the CAQ together with my application,so it would be very nice if you kindly double check my ...