英语帝来帮帮忙看看这段文字有没有错误!

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英语帝来帮帮忙看看这段文字有没有错误!
Don't know why
My heart is aching
Perhaps
My mind is addicted
My happiness and sadness
Had already been related to you
What can I do
Is to fall in love
Is to be in love
Just belive in myself
Just believe this love
Let the soft breeze bring the doubts away
A piece of fallen leaves
Is whispering in my ears
Warm sunlight is kissing me on my cheek
I will like a sunflower
Toward to the bright sun
Yes
You are my sun
My sunshine
请帮忙看看有没有语法错误或者别的问题谢谢了
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答案

我只能确定不是很地道的英文...有很多句子我都读得不是很流畅.
在美国读了这么多年书,这点还是知道的.
有一些语序很不对
例如especially I notice there still are massive incessant debates
notice应该是noticed,这是基本语法问题
there still are 应该是 there are still...语序问题
还有he always believe and obey
很基本的第三人称单数,语法错误,以英文为母语的人是不会犯这种低级语法错误的
文章还是很通顺的,所以应该至少到了大学水平把
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