求大神帮忙修改这篇作文（英语）

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求大神帮忙修改这篇作文（英语）
Unforgettable day
Chinese New year in a particular year,my family and I went shopping.
We bought a lot of things,such as ice cream,popcorn,oranges,milk and bread.Mom gave me bought a lot of toys.
After that we went to the zoo.I see a lot of animals,funny monkeys,lions is terrible,very cute hamsters.
We ate lunch under a tree.My dad told us a lot of jokes.Very interesting.
Really memorable day
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an unforgettable dayChinese New Year is a particular festival.I went shopping with my family.I bought a lot of things,such as ...My mom bought many toys for me.After that,we went to the zoo.I saw lots...