【急】懂托福的进 写了篇独立写作的

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【急】懂托福的进 写了篇独立写作的
我不会托福独立写作的compare and contrast and state your opinioin 的 我觉得一写这种类型的就会有些观点模糊 大家看看我写的文章 请耐心改一下 如何改正 我23号就考了 第一次 准备还不够啊
作文题目是It has been said,"Not everything that is learned is contained in books."Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books.In your opinion,which source is more important?Why?
People constantly explore the question whether knowledge is gained from books or from experience.Some people might believe that the knowledge gained from the books is more professional .However,in my view,I think that knowledge gained from the books is more impressive,more practical and more useful.“ Experience is the best teacher”is an old chiche,but I agree with it.
We can get much more professional information from the books.The author can provide us the specific information in a certain field of study.By studying from these books,we can raise our knowledge greatly and develop our intelligence at the same time.On the oth

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我问一句,你完整的读过这篇文章没?有些逻辑上的错误,还有一些自己支持观点的前后不照应.以上问题,读几遍就应该找得到.再来就是一些语法的问题了,象"deeper"应改为deeply," Like we study and take the exam"就是明显的中式英语了