我写的这两句有没有语法、时态上的错误、如果有错误请指出,最好帮我改正

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我写的这两句有没有语法、时态上的错误、如果有错误请指出,最好帮我改正
In my life,Messi is an important person to me.He makes me to like football.His motherland is Argentina.He is a footballplayer.Although he is not tall as other ballplayer,he makes many success in his motherland.He is a hero.Messi in my heart forever,he in everyone's heart forever.l love Messi.l love Argentina.

答案

第一处错在makes me 后面不加to.
第二处错在he is not tall这里要在tall 前面加as.
第三处错在other player后面要加s.
第四处.
第五处.错误不少啊~