雅思task2 看看有没有语法错误或是那里写的不好的 估计一下能得几分

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雅思task2 看看有没有语法错误或是那里写的不好的 估计一下能得几分
In modern societies,it is increasing popular that lots of foundations or organizations encourage people to join their activities,this behavior aroused people’s attention.However,no maters what the campaigns does some person still feel uncertain.
There are several reasons established the organizations take these captivities .for one thing,everyone want have a health lifestyle for the body and soul but do not know how.Those charities through campaigns to publicize the knowledge about health that can make people have a health lifestyle.Meanwhile through propaganda activities can provide some post to some people who have no source of income.Moreover,as far as the environment conservation of publicize foundations activities are play an increasing important role in the society world car free day is a typical instance.
At the same time,those activities have exert positive effects on our society .Through publicize how important have a health lif

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