请求帮忙英语造句

题目

请求帮忙英语造句
用computer-assisted,interpret ,submit ,stretch,symptom ,feel an
aversion to,communicate造句,顺便看看本人的句子有无语法错误.
Most people interpret the computer-assisted life as a new style of living.Receiving assignments,searching information and submitting exercises on Internet are more efficient and convenient.But I think working on Internet at a stretch may cause you the symptom of feeling an aversion to direct communication and that is harmful to you.

答案

楼主有才.只建议把最后的那个2个
1) that is harmful to you,改成
...communication,which is harmful to you.甚至which is harmful 就可以了.
2) 不要用But起句,换成 However,I think.