高一英语改错题求助

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高一英语改错题求助
one cold winter day in 1900,a small boy was called Charles Chaplin was walked along the strrrt in London.He doesn'thave breakfast or lunch.He wanted to buy some bread ,and he did't have any money .His father died since he was very young.His mother was often very sick,so she could take care of Charles or his brother Neither of them had to work to help his mother.He was very young but his dream was very big.He wanted to be great man in the world of films.So he worked very hardly

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On one cold winter day in 1900,a small boy called Charles Chaplin was walked along the street in London.He didn' t have breakfast or lunch.He wanted to buy some bread ,but he didn't have any money .His father died when he was very young.His mother was often very sick,but she had to take care of Charles or his brother.Neither of them could work to help their mother.He was very young but his dream was very big.He wanted to be a great man in the world of films.So he worked very hard.