帮我检查一下下面这段英文的错误

题目

帮我检查一下下面这段英文的错误
However,there are some people who holds dissenting opinion on the issue.They see little necessity in adopting such a test,saying that fluent spoken English is only a tiny part of one's competence which we depend to find a ideal job.Besides,as they added,not all jobs need such a superior English ability.

答案

However,there are some people who (hold) dissenting opinion on the issue.They see little necessity in adopting such a test,(stating) that fluent spoken English is only a tiny part of one's competence (in) which we depend (on) to find a ideal job.Besides,() they added,not all jobs (require) such a superior English ability.
括号里表示更换,增加或除去了的词.句子的词法也意思基本都正确.