帮忙看看有没有病句,再用英语翻译几个句子

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帮忙看看有没有病句,再用英语翻译几个句子
My name is XXX.I was born in April 6,1994.I`m 14years old now.I like sports,art and listening to music.I have many ideals,but I most want to be a lawyer.I`m study in No.1 Middle School.I like to study English very much.I think it`s very interesting and exciting.I like reading the Chinese traditional poems and writing,too.I can make Chinese knot. I think the knot is one of the symbols of China.We are going to hold the Olympic Games.I`m very excited about it.I hope I can do something for it.
我可以教外国人说中文,也可以给他们讲中国的历史,使他们能更好地了解中国．我也可以帮助他们在中国更好地旅行,体味中国文化
我想,中国举办奥运会是一件很了不起的事,这也是一个与外国朋友交流的机会,我更应该作为一个主人,欢迎来自各地的朋友们

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on April 6th,...具体日期but I want to be a lawyer mostmost移至句尾较好like writing and reading...同位两部分份量不一样,将短的移到前面较好你的英语还是不错的I can teach the foreigners Chinese, and tell t...