Sorry,I have something go out yeterday,so My colleague Lily help me replied your email!

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Sorry,I have something go out yeterday,so My colleague Lily help me replied your email!
Regarding the red dots,you are really do not worry about it,it is really very normal,we shipment to other client many times before,no client complain this!
We checked with the factory again,they told me the ETA for UPS and DHL all is 10/23,but the ensuring of DHL is better than UPS,so at the final,we choosed DHL.
I will give you the tracking no later today!
不用翻译成中文,只是检查我的语法错误并且修改,

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Sorry,I have something go out yeterday（整一句改为I went out yesterday for some emergency.）,so My colleague Lily help me replied (用原型reply) your email!
Regarding the red dots,you are really do not（are really do not 变为need not） worry about it,（前面的逗号改为句号）it is really very normal,（这里添加一个and）we shipment to other client（client加复数） many times before,no client complain this（no client complain this换为who didn't complain at all）!
We checked with the factory again,（加and）they told me the ETA for UPS and DHL all is 10/23,（前面逗号改句号）but the ensuring of DHL is better than UPS,so at the final（at the final改为finally）,we choosed DHL.
I will give you the tracking no later（添加than） today!

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