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Where does music come?We can study it?Or maybe it just is a talent,no one knows where it comes.
A boy in the story doesn't have good grades,he isn't good in chinese or math.He likes singing with other children together,but he does't sing well.When he looks for work first time,he is refused.He is a good boy,but he doesn't have specil talents.
But one day,he find a beautiful piano,and he find he can play the piano.he says he will play it in the future .And he had a dream .He want to do that……So,we can say that he doesn't find music,but music found him.
When he grown-up.He played piano well.And he become a piano musician.And his dream come true.This story is very good.It tell us how to make dream come true.And dream is useful things.It can tell you how to do some difficult things……
Everybody needs dream and if you work hard your dream will come true.
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Where does music come from?Can we study it?Or maybe it is just a talent.No one knows where it comes from.
There is a story about a boy who doesn't have good grades.He isn't good at chinese or maths.He likes to sing together with other children,but he doesn't sing very well.When he looked for his first job,he was refused.He is a good boy,but he doesn't have any special talents.
One day,he finds a beautiful piano and finds out that he can play the piano.He says he will play it in the future.He has a dream to become a musician.He wants to do it.So we can say that he didn't find music,but music found him.
When he grew up,he played the piano very well,he become a piano musician and made his dream come true.This story is very good as it tells us how to make our dreams come true.Dreams are useful as it allows you to do dificult things...
Everybody needs a dream.And if you work hard your dreams will come true.