检查一下这段英文有没有错误

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检查一下这段英文有没有错误
Never,Never Give Up
We often hear people say,“Never give up.” These can be encouraging words and words of determination.A person who believes in them will keep trying to reach his goal no matter how many times he fails.In my opinion,the quality of determination to succeed is an important one to have.Therefore,I believe that we should never give up.
One reason is that if we give up too easily,we will rarely achieve anything.It is not unusual for us to fail in our first attempt at something new,so we should not feel discouraged and should try again.Besides,if we always give up when we fail,we will not be able to develop new skills and grow as people.Another reason we should never give up is that we can learn from our mistakes only if we make a new effort.If we do not try again,the lesson we have learned is wasted.Finally,we should never give up because as we work to reach our goals,we develop confidence,and this confidence can help us succeed in other areas of

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语法非常好,只是有些 if 后面跟的动词时态不一致,比如if we always give up when we fail,we will not be able to develop new skills and grow as people.这里跟的是未来时,而if we give up,we have non (大概是打...