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This summer holiday I read a book called “Gulliver’s Travel’s”.Its writer is Jonathan swift.The book tells us a story about Gulliver in Lilliput.Making my impression the deepest among them is uniting of Lilliput citizens.Their size only has the Gulliver twelfth.But they can move Gulliver’s body.Why?Because they are very united.In the process of moving Gulliver and make the clothes for Gulliver,they all go for help.Although they are very small,they still can do something for Gulliver and do it very well.I think the thing we can learn from Lilliput citizens is their solidarity.

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Making my impression the deepest among them is uningting of liliput citizens .Their size only has the Gulliver twelfth改为 the deepest impression it made to me is the liliput‘s uniting,their size is only one twelfth of the guliver
why?because they are very united 中because改为for,一楼why 和because不能连用!
In the process of moving Gulliver and make the clothes for Gulliver把make改为making