求批阅英文作文

题目

求批阅英文作文
On Reading
Recently,a hot issue has been push to top about what is Reading.Exactly maybe [possibly]what is Reading let us be.
Some people hold that reading is a thing for fun merely.In their opinion,they choose reading[Choose to do ] as an approach when they are at leisure for a pure enjoyment.To be honest,we does get many happiness from reading novels.
While Some people believe and insist that reading should "improve us and enlarge us".For years from primary school to middle school and college.A direct learning style is reading the textbooks.What's more,when we are puzzled,down,quite a few people will find themselves again through a book onto their hearts.Reading teaches them many things like "how to live","who am i","keep a beautiful mind",many and many.
As for me,I can not agree with the latter view any more.Many times when I Lose temper or I am upset.Reading a book like chicken Soup For Soul is a quite Efficient way to calm me down.I deem nothing could provide more favor than reading.and I believe an increasing number of people are beginning to realize it.

答案

第二行的push-pushed
第二段最后一行的DO应该是表强调吧?如果是强调意的话要用do不是does,
后面的happiness不可数,many要改much,错误差不多了,暂时就看到这些
提个小建议的,倒数第三行的quite改成fairly更恰当一点,而且词汇比较高级,比quite 舒服一点
小建议,