请帮忙检查表述是否正确,英文谢谢!

题目

请帮忙检查表述是否正确,英文谢谢!
我想表达的意思是： 很抱歉告知因为海关查货这票货需要延到下一班船,请安排24号开船的船期并提供新的SO. 报关通过后,我将告诉你新的封条号码.
I'm sorry to inform you that the shipment have to book the next vessel due to Customs inspection. Please arrange the shipment with ETD at 24th and send the updated S/O.
we will tell you the seal number after the goods pass the custom clearance.

答案

应该是:
Sorry to inform customs check cargo ticket goods need to be postponed until the next boat,to arrange sailing sail on the 24th and to provide new SO.I will tell you after the adoption of the declaration,the new seal number.