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题目

英语高手来帮我看看这道改错题~!
I have a good friend who's name is LiYing.she is our 1_________
monitor and one of the excellent in our class. 2_________
Clever as she is, but she works very hard.We have a 3_________
lot on common and have a lot to talk about .One evening 4_________
she told me that something happened when her parents was 5_________
out.She was doing her homework one Sunday morning 6_________
when she smell something burnt.She stopped to look out 7_________
of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out 8_________
of her neighbor's house. She called 119 immediate.Ten 9_________
minutes later,firemen came and out out fire.Her neighbor 10________
was very thankful for her help. 11________
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答案

1 who's--whose2 the most excellent3 把very去掉,因为后面的hard是副词,不是形容词,前面不能用very修饰~4 on改成in 5 was改为were 6 on one sunday morning 7 smell改为smelt8 find改为found 9 immediately 10 the ...