一篇英语作文找错

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一篇英语作文找错
Knowledgeable changes the live.After hight middle school,the knowledgeable
we have learn is enought for us to keep live .But university is one of the most importand experience befor we begin to work .I think the university that I want to
learn is more liberty and have more opportunity than middle school.Studends
can choose what they should to learn .More knowlegedgeable.ability or make
friends and learn how to heat.to regret.to brea.to communica.to respect.to love
..The univesity likes a small society.though it is more honest.We will know because
we are different that each of us is special.Thanks to taking chances that we can
learn how to be brave.In the university.we can more understanding of what is around us.In the university.we make commitments.we see the potential.we know how to make colorful live in the future .how toenjoy the live!
That is all enought.

答案

真的好多错.
Knowledge changes the life.
After the middle school,the knowledge we have learned is enough for us to keep living.
But studying in the university is one of the most important experience before we start to work.
I think the university that I want to go to has more freedom and more opportunities than the middle school.Students can choose what they want to learn.
I can gain more knowledge and develop my ability of making friends,also can learn to (heat?这是要干什么啊 要烤谁吃吗?本来想表达的是热情的意思吗?) ,to regret,to communicate,to love.
The university is like a small society,though it's more innocent.We know we are different from each other,which make everyone special.
Thanks to the chances that we can learn how to be brave.In the university,we gain more undestanding of what's around us.
In the university,we make commitments,and we see the potentials in ourselves.We know how to enrich our lives in the future and how to enjoy the life!
That's all.