帮我写篇英语文章,

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帮我写篇英语文章,
朋友们帮我写篇英语的文章,我最喜欢的明星（MY FAVOURVITY IDOL),内容随便,但不要太难得,最好是适合初二的,明星：Avril Lavigne（艾薇儿拉维尼）,长度大概读起来一分半钟左右的,千万别长篇大论的那种,如果我用的话,追加他100分,求哥哥姐姐帮个忙

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My favourite idol--Avril lavigne
My favorite idol is Avril lavigne,who was born on Sep.27,and is from Canada.When she was 17,she left school and went to USA to learn guita.She loves skate board and in the MTV "Losing Skip",we can easily see she is on the board.How cool she is!And due to this reason,I like her for her enthusiasm and activity.As a young man ,we need this kind of spirit,with which can we face all kinds of difficulties at leisure.I like her not only on her songs ,but on her inner beauty--energy.
Many people would like to say that I am a ordinary fan of Avril lavigne,but I want to say:No,I like her only because I like her passion.
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