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Rose National School is located on the North of Guangzhou with abeautiful park nearby.There are 40 teachers from China and abroad who have richexperience in teaching and 250 students who are activitily and full of thespirit of cooperation are studying here.Moreover 30courses are chosen bystudents to study,which is in order to teach and improve the students’ abilityof analyzing and solving problems.Students join hand in various sports activitiesafter class,such as playing basketball,tennis,badmintons,swimming and soon.The dormitories here equip air-conditioners,washing machines,computersand WIFI,so the life here is comfortable and convenience.

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Rose National School is located in (仅描写个物体的位多时用on) the North of Guangzhou with a beautiful park nearby.There are 40 teachers from China and abroad in this school who have rich experiences i...