麻烦谁给改下作文

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麻烦谁给改下作文
Forrest gump
In a normal afternoon,I saw a famous film what make me change myself.Its name is Forrest gump.
The novel begining of the movie attract my heart.A piece of feather stop near his shose.He hold some chocolates and talk about something to a girl.His mother always said:” life was like a box of chocclaes.You never kown what you are going to get”.There are many beautiful sentences like this in the movie touch my heart the same.Frome this i can get much significance of life.
After the second war Forrest Gump was born a small country in south of UAS.It is very terrible .because he is a mentally handicapped boy.But he do not give up and his mother encouraged him and say :”you are no different than anybody else is .luckyly,the god didn’t abandon him,at the same time,he is a talent player.He can run fast.His heart and mind is pure like water.in the school bus,he meets a girl who is his true love.In the junior of school he went to a collage and got a new live frome here.last he became a rugby player ,a super star.Then ,he was receieved as an honoured guest at the White House.After university graduation,as a new soldier ,he join the vietnam war.
The war stop,as the emissary of bing-pang diplomacy,gump went to china attend table tennis match.His belif is :”a promise is a promise”.so he successed.but he didn’t like money.last he became a gardener and has a harmonious family.

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