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Today,I'd like to tell you something about Dwight Howard.Howard is now a member of the Orlando Magic,who stands 2.06 meters,weights 120KG.He has nickname is Superman .His is very very strong.He was drafted in the first place by the magiv in 2004,and he has amazing rebound skill.Last year,he led the Magic beated the Cleveland,and won the PLAYOFFS EAST FINAL.I think he will lead the Magic,and become the MVP of the PLAYOFFS FINAL.He will get better!

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Today,I'd like to tell you something about Dwight Howard.Howard is now a member of the Orlando Magic,who has a hight of 2.06 meters,and a weight of 120KG.He has a nickname——Superman .He is very stro...