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Some people argue that teaching children of different abilities together benefits all of them.Other believe that intelligent children should be taught separately and given special treatment .discuss both views and how do you think about it?
Nowadays,people always find themselves in a dilemma when deciding whether intelligent children should b taught separately and given special treatment or not..in this I will explore two main arguments often heard in this controversy.
There are reasons for some people to believe that shools should teach children of different abilities together.In the first place,it seems teaching children together can creat a sense of “cooperation”.By that I mean when children studying together ,they can help each other,children who are intelligent can teach others who are normal .they can study together and play together.Further more,it also can benefit children from learning communication skills,which means children who taught separately may

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