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Create a greencampus
1、 建设绿色校园十分重要
2、 绿色校园不仅指绿色环境
3、 为了建设绿色校园我们应该……
Create a green campus
In recent years,environmentally friendly societyis always talked between one person to another.campus is a part of society,sowe should create a green campus to respond the society and make our life betterthan before.
Green campus not only means greenenvironment.on the one hand,campus should be planted many trees and flowers tomake it turn into green and beautiful.green campus will make students andteachers live comfortably.one the other hand,green campus require that studentsand teachers should protect the environment ,don’t litter and spit everywhere.
In order to create a green campus we shouldconsider ourselves as the host of our campus and make propaganda for“create a green campus”,packingup the litter you see.finally,planting many trees year by year.
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In recent years,environmental friendly society is are always a topic in daily life.campus is also a kind of small society.in order to make our like better,it is necessary to creat a green campus.Green...