谁能告诉我这段英语有没有语法错误啊?

题目

谁能告诉我这段英语有没有语法错误啊?
我英语超烂的,所以希望大家帮个忙
如下：
Maybe the sky also has seasons.
When I met you ,it's spring.
When I fell in love with you,it's summer.
When I left you ,it's autumn.
And now I'm missing you,it's winter

答案

意境挺真的,也看不出什么错来,但sky 在这里是什么?天本来就有季节的,想了半天没想明白,顺手仿写了一回Maybe there are seasons of feelingsAnd every season has its reasonSpring budded when I met youSummer blos...