看看我写的这篇英语作文有没有问题,

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看看我写的这篇英语作文有没有问题,
Today is November 10 and winter has arrive.The weather get cold and it snow heavily.There are four seasons in Shanghai.They are spring,summer,autumn and winter.In spring,it is warm.In summer,it is hot.Many peoplelike having ice cream and soft drinks.In autumn,it is cold.We can see many fallen leaves.In winter,it is cold.We can make snowmen in the yard.
The weather is very changeable in Shanghai.

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Today is November 10 and winter is coming.The weather gets cold and it snows heavily.There are four seasons in Shanghai.They are spring,summer,autumn and winter.In spring,it is warm,while in summer,it...