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英语作文!我自己写的!求拍砖!求润色+修改...
Our office holding an external training in XX international hotel today. Colleagues from Beijing and Guangzhou get together in Shanghai. At the begging, the host introduce our company. I feel proud of my company, a big warm home with several subsidiaries in it. We separated into 8 groups, sitting around a desk with teem members and sharing with each other, work method and ideas. Then, every group has a case to be solved cooperated. It is really an amazing experience for me to get a deep recognition about our company, meanwhile, nice to meet a lot of friends and try our best to achieve a same goal.

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Our office held an training in XX International Hotel in Shanghai today.Colleagues from Beijing and Guangzhou were also participated in this event.The training began with an introduction about ou...