请帮我为这篇四级文章+估分

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请帮我为这篇四级文章+估分
帮我看下这篇文章可以多少分.按照总分106.5可以得多少 15分制可以多少分?
Along with the advance of the society,more and more problems are brought to our attention,one of which is the green campus.The recent report shows that the green campus is not only good for our health,but also for our study .thus,the green campus is very important for us.
As we know,the green campus is (写出了be)ont only means the environment,but also means the behavior,the area(单词拼错.本想写aura),the culture and so on.
Consequently,to creat a green campus,some measures should be taken.it is a high time we took some measures to creat a green campus.To begin with,we should plant more trees and look after them.Then,we should keep our shoolyard and dooms clean.Furthermore,we should respect each other beetween the friends and teachers.Finally,we should make a lively campus.We all know that an attive(单词拼错 想写 active) area(单词再次写错aura) can make us feel confident and pay more attention to our study.
第二段内容似乎不止.有些忘记了
知道这个文章写得
答案
很好嘛!不过个人认为有些短语重复多了,not only but also,mean,take measures.整体上很好.不过还得看书写情况!书写还好的话10分能拿7,8分吧!
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