帮我看看这篇英语作文是否有错

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帮我看看这篇英语作文是否有错
I have a happy,a warm family.In my family,has five people,father,mother,brother,sister,and me.My father is a boss,he is tall,he wears a pair of glasses,he likes watching TV.Mum was a boss,she is not fat and not very thin,she likes reading.Brother study in Switzerland a famous school,he likes to play computer.My sister is tall we are in the same class reading books,we all like playing computer.

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I have a happy and warm family.there are five members in my family,my father,my mother,my brother,my sister and I,My father is a boss,He is tall.He wears a pair of glasses.He likes watching TV.My mum was a boss,too,but now she is (填个职业）.She is not fat and not very thin.She likes reading.My brother studies in a famous school in Switzerland .He likes to play computer. My sister is tall.We are in the same class,and we like to play computer,too.