帮忙改改英语自我介绍,马上就比赛了!

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帮忙改改英语自我介绍,马上就比赛了!
Hi,everybody,my name is ***.I’m 14 years old.I’m an active girl in my school.I have many hobbies,such as singing,swimming,but my favourite is English.English bring the wonderful fun to my life.Perhaps someone thinks it’s difficult to study well,but I like it.I dream of being an translator when I grow up.It isn’t a day dream.I know it’s difficult to succeed and I have to double to effort.But I want to try.I will do my best.I believe that if you try your best,everything can be done well.
帮着改改啊，100个词左右，

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Hi, everybody, my name is ***. I’m 14 years old. I’m an active girl in my school. I have many hobbies, such as singing, swimming, but my favourite is English.(这里可以换一下句型,如果是比赛用的,连着N...