2011考研作文

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2011考研作文
About money worship
In the morden society,a large number of people suppose that money is everything.They can’t live without money in their daily life.Consequently,they view money as their own lives.It is undeniable that money,which does much benefit in many respects.Money help us to achieve our goals.While buying living necessities or studing abroad for further education,what the most important and essential thing we should consider is money.To some extent,money not only improves our material life but also our spirtual life.
As a matter of fact,everything has two sides.Too often,a vast collectiong of possession ends up possessing its owner.The asset we should value,aside from money,are health,family and long-standing friendship.Take Warren Buffett for example,more than 99% of his wealth will be donated to the foundations benefiting schools and medical organizations.In contrast,his family and he will give up nothing they need by fulfilling this 99% pledge.Money is t

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About money worship【About mammon worship】
In the morden society, a large number of people suppose that money is everything. They can’t live without money in their daily life. Consequently, they view【regard】 money as their own lives. 【It is undeniable that money, which does much benefit in many respects.这句语法不对,不明白你要表达什么】 Money help【helps】 us to achieve our goals. While【when】 buying living necessities【living goods or daily necessities】 or studing abroad for further education, what【去掉】 the most important and essential thing we should consider is money. To some extent, money improves 【not only】our material life but also our spirtual life.
As a matter of fact, everything has two sides. Too often, a vast collectiong of possession ends up possessing its owner【不太理解这句话,是名言还是你自己写的?】. The asset we should value, aside from money, are【主语是asset的话,用is】 health, family and long-standing friendship. Take Warren Buffett for example, more than 99% of his wealth will be donated to the foundations benefiting schools and medical organizations【将来时吗?他的钱不是已经捐给比尔盖茨的基金会了吗?】. In contrast, his family and he will give up nothing they need by fulfilling this 99% pledge. 【Whether】 money is the root of happiness or source of evils, 【去掉逗号这是一句话】all depends on ourselves. Only by taking a correct attitude can we not pursue money blindly.
尽量少使用自己不熟的单词,写作最主要的是表达清楚意思和语法正确（觉得你用从句的时候容易出错）,希望以上对你有所帮助.