My self

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My self
I am a girl!My name is xxx.I'm13 years old.
I like piay computer games and watch TV .But I like play with my friends,too.
My favourite color is white .I think it's so beautful.I don't like green.But my best friend Jeff does.
Sometimes,I play sports onweekends.I like play badminton.
I have a good team!It's group six.Ilove every members in my team.
I have many friends.Watermelon,Jeff,Snoopy,and more.
My favourite fruit is melons.But watermelon likes pineapples.
This is me.A lovely girl!Do you like me
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帮我挑挑错误..我自己写的..

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Myself
I am a girl! My name is xxx. I'm13 years old.
I like (playing) computer games and (watching) TV. But I like (playing) with my friends too. My favourite color is white. I think it's so (beautiful). I don't like green.But my best friend Jeff does. Sometimes, I play sports on weekends. I like (playing) badminton. I (am in) a good team! It's group six. I love every (member) in my team. I have many friends, (such as) Watermelon, Jeff, Snoopy and (many) more. My favourite fruit is (melon). (I prefer) watermelon (to) pineapples. This is me, a lovely girl! Do you like me ?
还行吧,最主要的错误就是： like doing sth. 不是 like do sth. 改的地方都用了括号.