英语作文修改,文字要地道且无语法错误

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英语作文修改,文字要地道且无语法错误
March 22,2010 Monday Sunny
Today is World Water Day.I participated in a series of activities calling for water-saving on World Water Day which was quite a meaningful.We held a class meeting from 10 o’clock.After heated discussion,we were going to prepare the afternoon’s activities with some agreements reached.
At 2:00 pm,we went to the community.By giving out the leaflets,we supposed to lead everyone in the community to know the importance of water conservation.An hour having past,an old expert we invited gave a speech on the water crisis in China meeting the need to popularize the present situation of world water that made most people around the world feel pessimistic about it.
After the speech,we had a discussion with our neighbors about practical ways to save water in our daily life.I suggested we should turn off the tap after use and a girl showed her idea that reusing the water was equally vital.
It was realty an unforgettable experience for

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March 22,2010 Monday Sunny
Today is World Water Day.I participated in a series of activities called water-saving on World Water Day which was quite meaningful.We held a class meeting from 10 o’clock.After a heated discussion,we were about to prepare the activities in the afternoon which we agreed with.
At 2:00 pm,we went to the community.By distributing the leaflets,we wanted everyone in the community to know the importance of water conservation.After an hour ,the old expert we invited gave a speech on the water crisis in China and emphasized that we need to popularize the present world water situation which made most people around the world feel pessimistic .
After the speech,we had a discussion with our neighbors about practical ways to save water in our daily life.I suggested we should turn off the tap after using and a girl showed her idea that reusing the water was equally vital.
It was realy an unforgettable experience because I did my best to publicize the significance (前面用了importance了）of saving the water,I will bear today’s memory all the time.