急英文就职信 改语法

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急英文就职信 改语法
是作文,内容不要管,最好今天晚上能改好
January th21
Dynasty Tours Pte Ltd
10 Raffles Quay #03-03 Tower 1
Singapore 1792
Dear manager:
I'm a Chinese people,I was graduate from National University of Singapore 3 years ago.1 mouth ago,I lost my job.Because the company is not very well.So I give my boss my letter of resign and leave the company.And 1 week ago,I saw your company job openings.I have to display much interest in your company and the job.So I write a CV for you .
My name is Henry,I'm a man.I'm 25 years old.My hometown is China and I was living in Singapore 10 years.So I have a preferable English base.I was graduate from National University of Singapore.My subject is Hospitality and Tourism.
You know National University of Singapore is a famous university in Singapore and world.So I have a preferable basic knowledge.I have 3 years working experience.In despite this company not very big.But in this company I was act I assume that the management work.And a majority of staff consider my work is good.So I have preferable working experience.In Singapore 10 years.My parents,friends,teacher and boss consider me is a honest,make progress,business like and optimism man.I think this advantage is helps a lot of work.But I still have some disadvasntage,like sometimes lazy and do not care.But I think this disadvantages can correction.I will do my best to correction them.So I want get a chance.
I find out Dynasty Tours Pte Ltd is a good and big company.It have 20 years history.The headquarter in Singapore.Now the company have 4 branch companies and have above 2000 staff.It's a with the strength of the company.
I want come into the company long time.And I know,many talents want come into the company.Maybe I'm not the best one.But if I can induction,I will do my best to work.
I do not ask for much on salaries.I hope get 22000 dollars one year.If I can get some company benefits,It's the best.
My thlephone number 98276482.Look forward to your calls.
Thanks for reading.
Henry

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大前提,我猜你是翻译的吧!文章怪怪的,而且现在是formal letter,不可以缩写 1.I was graduate from National University of Singapore 3 years ago.→graduate is verb/noun if verb,here is passive voice(be+v.+ed)...