麻烦看一下这篇英语文章的语法和时态等等有没有什么问题

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麻烦看一下这篇英语文章的语法和时态等等有没有什么问题
Good afternoon everyone!it;s my great honor to introduce myself to you here.my name is xxx,and you can call me whiskii.now,i am studying in xxx school.in my spare time,i like playing guzheng.sometimes i surf the internet and download the e-books to read.reading e-books is fun.in addition,it also enlarges my vocabulary words because of the advanced technology and the vivid animations.well,i truly believe that no matter what the result is,i'll always try my best.cause if i tried,i am the winner.now,i will share an article with you.by the way,god bless us everyone.

答案

1、download the e-books:download e-books 去掉THE
2.READING E-BOOKS IS FUN.这句可改可不改
3.enlarges my vocabulary words 》》ENRICH MY VOCABULARY 就够了
4.it also enlarges my vocabulary words because of the advanced technology and the vivid animations..这句话逻辑不清,因果不明,