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帮我修改一下演讲稿吧,下面就是我的演讲稿,演讲稿里面还有音标.
Hello everybody!My topic is " Shanghai expo brings me a lot." Shanghai world expo theme is "better city,better life".What does Shanghai expo bring to me?First:"sunshine valley" make us most admiration[,ædm'rein],make whole expo can realize energy['endi] saving['seivi] ,Third:the " Riverside Scene[sin] at Qingming Festival "in China Pavilion[p'viljn] let me feel esoteric about the 5000 years Chinese culture['klt],making me more interested in it,and so on.Finally,we also do not forget volunteers[,vln'ti],they paid a lot for the expo,we should thank them .At last,I wish our great motherland more beautiful tomorrow!
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Hello everybody!My topic is " Shanghai expo brings me a lot."
The theme of Shanghai expo is "better city, better life". What does Shanghai expo bring me? First: "sunshine valley" is admirable , makes the whole expo realize that energy saving is important.Second: the " Riverside Scene[sin] at Qingming Festival "in China Pavilion[p'viljn] makes me curious about Chinese culture['klt] of the 5000 years , makes me more interested in it,and so on. Finally, we also will not forget the volunteers[,vln'ti], who paid a lot for the expo, we should appreciate them .At last, I wish our great motherland more beautiful tomorrow!