I enjoy seeing the beauty of the sky and the sun shining on me. 这句话是对的吗?

题目

I enjoy seeing the beauty of the sky and the sun shining on me. 这句话是对的吗?
I enjoy seeing the beauty of the sky and the sun shining on me.
如果不对 请告诉我怎么改?
谢谢.

答案

I enjoy the beauty of the sky and the warmth of the sunshine.
我感觉这样改一下会比较好啦.结构要对称的.