突然贮藏门开了,一个男人走了进来.理查兹夫人这才想到一定是供电局来人查电表了.她说了声“是我,别怕!”然后想进行一番解释,但已来不及了.那人大叫了一声,惊退了几步.理查兹夫人朝他走去,只见他“砰”的一

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突然贮藏门开了,一个男人走了进来.理查兹夫人这才想到一定是供电局来人查电表了.她说了声“是我,别怕!”然后想进行一番解释,但已来不及了.那人大叫了一声,惊退了几步.理查兹夫人朝他走去,只见他“砰”的一声关上门逃走了.
A man came in when the store-room door was opend suddenly.Mrs Richards remembered that it must be the man from the Electricity Board for checking ammeter.She gave some voice:“it’s me.Don’t be scared”.She wanted to do some explanation for this,but it was too late.The man was frighten to scream,then backing several footsteps .Mrs Richards walked to him,but he closed the door instantly,running away.
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【Suddently,the store-room door was opened,and a】man came in.Mrs Richards remembered【then】that it must be the man from the Electricity Board【to check the】ammeter.She【said】 “it’s me.Don’t be ...