求大神看下我写的一段英语,有没有语法点的错误,有的话帮我修改一下.关于冰河时代3的英语简介

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求大神看下我写的一段英语,有没有语法点的错误,有的话帮我修改一下.关于冰河时代3的英语简介
There are many animals in the movie.Like mammoth、squirrel and dinosaur ……They went to a different type of world.But after many things make they were dangerous.The movie is interesting.

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There are many animals in the movie.Like mammoths,squirrels and dinosaurs...They went to a world which is different from the world that they came from.After many dangerous experience,they all became b...